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Re: What heart?
umm, well, the person that I'm writing it for wrote down how long that he had been going out with a girl, and stuff like that. I asked him why ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: What heart?
What Heart? You say to me, give me your heart. But why? Why was I placed on this futile earth, to live, breath, basically worship you? How can I give ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Last person to post wins
I'm confused. w/e
May 10, 2008 -
Re: First Kiss
Ahh, here come the butterflies. lovely, just lovely. *Tears of joy*
May 10, 2008 -
Re: The only poem you will ever get out of me ever.
I don't know why you don't like writing poetry, but it's your choice. I really enjoyed this piece because I can feel the emotion. Excellent.
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Shoes
It is a sweet poem with lots of meaning. Nice.
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Eat it up
Bland feelings. Blunt passion. Is this what I deserve? Hopeless affections. Cheating on me, again; Man, you have a nerve. So, you go and move away To another state. Didn't ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Eighth (And LAST) Chapter of Wrong or Right
Gahh! Do you have to end it here? Can you start a second book? Ahh, anyways, I loved it.
May 10, 2008 -
Re: They told me to
Whoa. i liked it. The ending was really suprising. Actually, I think the ending was the best part of the whole piece.
May 10, 2008 -
Re: The Choice
For writing it so quickly, it was great. I couldn't really feel the emotion. It was good, but who or what are we talking about in it? Please try to ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Fallen Angels~Chapter 1
AHHH! I really liked it. People need to stop being so harsh. Everyone pointed out everything, so I guess I'll give you some praise. *Good description *Thanks for mentioning a ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Soul-Searching
that was really kinda dark. Ny'ways, still loved it. just, try not to make it sound so emo. Not that emo is bad, I just don't think it was your ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 6 of Wrong Or Right
I like the series(i'm gonna call it that), but you really need to WRITE-MORE-SO-YOU DON'T-KEEP-MAKING-US-SUSPENSFUL!! Please and thank you.
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Body heat 9a love poem)
It was enjoyable. I really couldn't quite catch the flow of it, but the descriptivness was great. I could feel it coming striaght from your heart, and thats all that ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 5 of Wrong or Right
AHHH! Why must you tease us with just writing a little bit. This earns a gold star. I need the next chapter please. 8)
May 4, 2008
